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:-)

i liked it

don't be so self conscious... its not like you're broadcasting your face and home address out there...

if you're not willing to take constructive critisism, don't post your stuff.

remember, you are your own worst critic.

i think my stuff sucks, but i post it anyway...

i like the guitar and your voice sounds great

the whole song is pretty catchy!
FOUR'eD!

Gunshy responds:

thnx
can't help selfconsciousness... ive been told my voice sounds like "a cat being choked to death," so there are sometimes when i don't even like talking.
i'm willing to take the criticism, but i as an artist i fall into this trap of thinking about what the audience like sor dislikes, expects and doesn't, and thats all bs. it's silly to try and predict what your reactions will be.
i am my own worst critic
thnx

not too bad

It sounds a little too electronic.

If you want to make it sound like a real drummer played it, put some volume difference in there. Instead of having the snare even in volume when you do little rolls, change the volume from lower to higher. Accent some notes.
Add flams (notes in low volume immediately followed by a note of high volume on the same instrument)

It sounds good, its just a little empty. Add some quick 16th/32nd notes between toms bass and snare, or to make it sound more musical, add some bass guitar over the bass drum.

I'm learning how to program drums like a real drumkit myself. I actually get behind my drumkit and play what i want to hear, then pay attention to how i hit everything. THen i adjust volume.
You'd be surprised at how much volume control could have a say in how real the sound is.

TheKingofNAT responds:

awesome, thanks for the advice, I shall try changing it up a bit. Good luck on your work dude. =D

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