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Age/Gender: 21, Male
Location: Deutschland

I love music. I play a few instruments but lately i just center around electronic music. I come here mainly for the audio portal. Be sure to check out my stuff. I've been around newgrounds for a couple years now, i just can't remember my former login

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Score: 9
-Sialys- Trance WIP

"cool"

date: June 23, 2008

hey bro, sorry i didnt get a chance to review your stuff.. computer wouldn't let me listen to anything for a few days :)

I really like the intro to this song, but i feel it would be more suitable to have a SLOW trapkit drumbeat in the back instead of a technoesque beat.

Or if you like the techno beat, add some reverb or delay so it doesn't sound as flat.

The drums should compliment the beginning by being more open

4/5

9/10

June 23, 2008

Author's Response:

Well see, this song is going to build up and get way, way faster. It's running at 155 BPM. So... If you've ever heard Adagio for Strings remixes this is kind of like that I guess you could say.
If you mean it needs a slow drumbeat during the pads, I'm not sure how that would work...
If you mean over that bassline, don't even worry about that. That's long since been removed and I'm attempting to come up with better ideas, so far it ain't workin'. :P

Thanks for the great scores!

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Score: 9
DJ Derrick--Walk Alone (Ext.)

"nice"

date: May 6, 2008

good work dude, keep it up!

i haven't heard any "UK Club" music on here

very nice

:-)

May 6, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man!

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Score: 8
Waltz in F Major

"nice"

submission: Waltz in F Major
date: April 17, 2008

very nice, i like it... just sounds a little empty in places, but it definately gets made up for.

April 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah it does feel a bit empty in places and totally wrong for a waltz. am I still dancing or not? lol ty for the review

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Score: 9
Pink Elephants And Lemonade

"haha!"

date: April 17, 2008

this is the coolest shit ever!

good work dude!

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Score: 8
Echo Caves

"nice"

submission: Echo Caves
date: April 17, 2008

Hey dude, nice work. Its good to see a little bit of some IDM style music on here.

My only thing is that the drums are a little too distorted and techno like in some places for my tastes.... other than that, brillliant.
keep it up... and glitch it up ;-)

April 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Hehe thx. Maybe I will glitch it up. Lol.

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Score: 8
ISA_Rigorous Course

"Not bad"

date: April 16, 2008

For a trance song, thats not a bad little thing you got going on.

I'm not much of a trance/techno maker, so i can't lay down any constructive critisism right off the bat. The levels seemed good to me

Maybe some more backing melody lines or something like that.

Keep it up, eventually you'll get the hang of making music through programs.

April 16, 2008

Author's Response:

Many thanks for your criticism.
I only started using FL Studio about a week ago. Before, I used programs like GarageBand and ACID, so this is something new to me.

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Score: 8
A Light in the Road III

"Good stuff"

date: April 16, 2008

Very nice, bro. Some of your notes were a little "snappy" but, other than that, it wasn't a bad arrangement.

Very nice job at multi tracking.

Maybe put the first secondary guitar not so right speaker heavy. Pan them out a little better.

Let me know if you need drum tracks ;-)

April 16, 2008

Author's Response:

I do need drum track! :P for the second part of the song, the distorted one :P

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Score: 9
(NUB)This Persists

"very nice!"

submission: (NUB)This Persists
date: April 8, 2008

i like this a lot! great usage of a slightly akward time signature

now use a really akward one like seven four or eleven eight ;-)

do you layer your beats?

how do you get the glitchy sound... do you just put a snare hit back to back really fast? or is there something more to it?

i'm experimenting with "faster" music like this, and i'd like to learn all i can about how the drums are created.

i have a faint idea, but there always might be something that i had no idea about you know?

April 8, 2008

Author's Response:

Feel free to PM me with any questions you might have. I'm no pro, but I'd be more than happy to share what i know :D

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Score: 9
<{moonlight sonata}>

"I like it!"

date: April 2, 2008

Sounds good!

all you need is a 6/8 beat rocking it in the background and you'll have yourself an amazing remix

April 6, 2008

Author's Response:

ohh its 6/8? damn ive had the hardest time finding this songs time sig. ive been trying to put some drums only couldnt find the right rhythm. ill get right on it. thanks for the review.
<{MC}>

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Score: 7
Dead Hero (demo remix)

":-)"

date: April 2, 2008

i liked it

don't be so self conscious... its not like you're broadcasting your face and home address out there...

if you're not willing to take constructive critisism, don't post your stuff.

remember, you are your own worst critic.

i think my stuff sucks, but i post it anyway...

i like the guitar and your voice sounds great

the whole song is pretty catchy!
FOUR'eD!

April 3, 2008

Author's Response:

thnx
can't help selfconsciousness... ive been told my voice sounds like "a cat being choked to death," so there are sometimes when i don't even like talking.
i'm willing to take the criticism, but i as an artist i fall into this trap of thinking about what the audience like sor dislikes, expects and doesn't, and thats all bs. it's silly to try and predict what your reactions will be.
i am my own worst critic
thnx

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