UntitledWhite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Light in the Road III]

Good stuff

Very nice, bro. Some of your notes were a little "snappy" but, other than that, it wasn't a bad arrangement.

Very nice job at multi tracking.

Maybe put the first secondary guitar not so right speaker heavy. Pan them out a little better.

Let me know if you need drum tracks ;-)

Gian responds:

I do need drum track! :P for the second part of the song, the distorted one :P

[(NUB)This Persists]

very nice!

i like this a lot! great usage of a slightly akward time signature

now use a really akward one like seven four or eleven eight ;-)

do you layer your beats?

how do you get the glitchy sound... do you just put a snare hit back to back really fast? or is there something more to it?

i'm experimenting with "faster" music like this, and i'd like to learn all i can about how the drums are created.

i have a faint idea, but there always might be something that i had no idea about you know?

nubbinownz responds:

Feel free to PM me with any questions you might have. I'm no pro, but I'd be more than happy to share what i know :D

[<{moonlight sonata}>]

I like it!

Sounds good!

all you need is a 6/8 beat rocking it in the background and you'll have yourself an amazing remix

MadChris responds:

ohh its 6/8? damn ive had the hardest time finding this songs time sig. ive been trying to put some drums only couldnt find the right rhythm. ill get right on it. thanks for the review.
<{MC}>

[Dead Hero (demo remix)]

:-)

i liked it

don't be so self conscious... its not like you're broadcasting your face and home address out there...

if you're not willing to take constructive critisism, don't post your stuff.

remember, you are your own worst critic.

i think my stuff sucks, but i post it anyway...

i like the guitar and your voice sounds great

the whole song is pretty catchy!
FOUR'eD!

Gunshy responds:

thnx
can't help selfconsciousness... ive been told my voice sounds like "a cat being choked to death," so there are sometimes when i don't even like talking.
i'm willing to take the criticism, but i as an artist i fall into this trap of thinking about what the audience like sor dislikes, expects and doesn't, and thats all bs. it's silly to try and predict what your reactions will be.
i am my own worst critic
thnx

[NAT's [Drumms for All] ver 1]

not too bad

It sounds a little too electronic.

If you want to make it sound like a real drummer played it, put some volume difference in there. Instead of having the snare even in volume when you do little rolls, change the volume from lower to higher. Accent some notes.
Add flams (notes in low volume immediately followed by a note of high volume on the same instrument)

It sounds good, its just a little empty. Add some quick 16th/32nd notes between toms bass and snare, or to make it sound more musical, add some bass guitar over the bass drum.

I'm learning how to program drums like a real drumkit myself. I actually get behind my drumkit and play what i want to hear, then pay attention to how i hit everything. THen i adjust volume.
You'd be surprised at how much volume control could have a say in how real the sound is.

TheKingofNAT responds:

awesome, thanks for the advice, I shall try changing it up a bit. Good luck on your work dude. =D

[vals de sombras (2008 remix)]

i like it :)

its a bit repetative, but i dig the waltz feel.

maybe add in some snare to provide a backbeat?